I finally finished Part 5. I stayed up till about 3 AM last night, adding and fixing some parts. I managed to bring it to 5.000 as well as adding some small but crucial details. I still am not 100% satisfied but there are parts that I am really proud of. I really love the scene with Saga, it came so naturally, also I like the Hiroto scene and I even managed to give Nao a few meaningful sentences so I might be on the right track)
The deed is done. I even reposted to alice nine yaoi comm which is kind of gross but oh well. Now I have 3 one-shots to work on, all very different but interesting. A good NC scene is long overdue but before getting to that I got lost in my own reflections and theories. I will try to cut on the thinking and add more of the feeling. Also I'll try to make posters for all parts.